Changing Idea

 In the later stages of editing and after recieiving feedback from our peers we decided we wanted to totally start again with a new title sequence.

We decided to get our feedback verbally as it allows us to ask the person to expand or explain what they mean and possibly means they will give more detail as they arent having to take time to write it down

Top Feedback Quotes

"I thought the content was hilarious"
"The beginning part about destiny and fate is a bit too serious for the content"
"The links back to bad luck and misfortune show consistency"
"The concept is quite effective"
"The titles need to be all in the same font with same colour and size"
"The poo and wee is grim"

From our feedback and watching other peoples title sequences we realised that comedy is quite a hard genre to try and work round as everyone has different senses of humour and it is quite challenging to demonstrate skills when editing. The content and concept are too specific when doing comedy as half of the class thought the content was funny and the other half thought it was inappropriate. We have decided to attempt another title sequence and use the thriller genre with the intention to use a more effective concept with editing skills.

Things to consider for the next one:
- titles in the same font and style
- consider the concept more thoroughly taking audience into account
- plan a shooting schedule and use a storyboard more effectively so enough shots are taken and it flows