Feedback

 We have faced a lot of decisions in the editing process whether it be to change the music or add an effect which we have found hard to decide whether to do or not as one little thing can change the whole tone of the sequence. We have taken to our peers to help us with these decisions and most recently asked the group next to us to watch what we have done so far and comment on what they thought could be improved. They mainly said that the editing needed improving inparticular fading and adding extra effects to make it seem more funny and modern. We asked them what they would think to a split screen and they thought this would be a good idea as our footage exceeds the time limit and it adds a bit of variation. We have decided to add a split screen where the screen splits into four and we see a zoom on each indivual piece regarding the cat and it ends in us seeing the cats poo. We also decided to do extreme fading in certain bits where he is trying to get his deodrant can to work as this adds more comedy value. We are continuing to edit our piece to its full potential but do not want to interrupt its concept of a journey with too many split screens or effects.




 We showed our title sequence to a larger target audience of older teenagres (15-18 year olds) and recieved feedback to help us with our second draft. This is the feedback we recieved:

• Titles should all be in the same colour, font and animation.
• The cross-fading doesn't fit very well with the genre.
• The concept worked and was funny but the close ups of wee and poo were a bit too crude.
• The title of the film at the end on the green background didn't work very well.
• The beginning with the definition and talking didn't really fit with the rest of the title sequence but the concept of fate throughout worked well.
• The content was good as it works with the comedy genre and is funny.
• Some of the editing needs to be worked on.
• There are too many different things happening which makes it over complicated.